Talk:DC Ahmadi

There are multiple issues with this page: Unforunately I don't see how these issues can be fixed without rewriting the entire page so after a week if these problems remain then the article will be deleted. David (talk) 20:16, July 1, 2019 (UTC)
 * No image or list of appearances.
 * The prose contains spelling and grammatical errors and incorrect tense in part of the second paragraph.
 * No dates are given for any of the events even though his appearances took place in three different years. It's not clear when the prose moves onto a different storyline - the odd "six months later..." would help.
 * The writing style leaves the connection between events very unclear, especially in the first paragraph. It's simply "character A does one thing. Character B does another thing. Character A does one thing...." ad nauseum with no indication of how one event leads to the next. There's no flow to it.